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    dots Submission Name: Friendshipdots

    Author: Anju
    ASL Info:    25/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 24/27/15
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    Friendship is the gold of trust
    The gold that never rust;
    Friendship is the bond of souls
    The bond that never breaks;
    Friendship is a token of love
    A token that Shines forever;
    Gaining a friend is a treasure hunt
    And a treasure that last for years 'n' years...

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      Yes, a very short and sensible poem about the value of friendship! Very well and most deftly done!! I loved it...
    | Posted on 2011-06-02 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi this is such nice poem about the true meaning of friendship.
    I like the last line.
    Your short poems says more then books could do about friendship.
    Good job.
    love shabnam
    | Posted on 2004-11-11 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]
      Very very short and very very simple too! Well written and well presented, the subject is wonderful of course.
    But I'm just wondering what makes you write alot about Friendship!
    | Posted on 2004-11-10 00:00:00 | by Yousef | [ Reply to This ]
      I admire you writing on such a wonderful subject. You wrote well. For the future think of fewer words, like this:
    Friendship, the gold of trust
    that never rusts
    The bond of souls
    that never breaks...
    It can make it easier to maintain your meter.
    | Posted on 2004-11-09 00:00:00 | by dmm | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem was so true! I think "good" friends are really hard to find. I liked how the poem was so short but you still got the message across. Good job!
    | Posted on 2004-11-09 00:00:00 | by devonbracy | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice poem . It said so much yet so little,everything that was need to be said was. I love it and i'm looking forward for more work from you. Plus i see nonthing wrong with it : )
    | Posted on 2004-11-12 00:00:00 | by Spiritual Gifts | [ Reply to This ]

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