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Friendship is the gold of trust
The gold that never rust;
Friendship is the bond of souls
The bond that never breaks;
Friendship is a token of love
A token that Shines forever;
Gaining a friend is a treasure hunt
And a treasure that last for years 'n' years...
Hi this is such nice poem about the true meaning of friendship. I like the last line. Your short poems says more then books could do about friendship. Good job. love shabnam
Very very short and very very simple too! Well written and well presented, the subject is wonderful of course. But I'm just wondering what makes you write alot about Friendship!
I admire you writing on such a wonderful subject. You wrote well. For the future think of fewer words, like this: Friendship, the gold of trust that never rusts The bond of souls that never breaks... It can make it easier to maintain your meter.
This poem was so true! I think "good" friends are really hard to find. I liked how the poem was so short but you still got the message across. Good job!
Very nice poem . It said so much yet so little,everything that was need to be said was. I love it and i'm looking forward for more work from you. Plus i see nonthing wrong with it : ) -Ember
Submission Name: Friendship
. It said so much yet so little,everything that was need to be said was. I love it and i'm looking forward for more work from you. Plus i see nonthing wrong with it : )