I love the way you reply to all your poems. One, it cracks me up and two, it gives me this picture of a personsplit down the middle, arguing with themselves all the time. This is a solid piece, not only a message, but actually written well. Good job.
LOL..slow night tonight dear not your poetry per se. LOL love the retort poem though even if sarcastic... about your content dear..Nothing Like experimenting and breaking all the rules as long as you know what the rules are...I have no probs with it. Poetry and poetic writing should be good for your soul..and touch a chord in your reader. The original write leaves some space for reader interpretation..so the second probably sends out a stronger message. Had to laugh at the second especially the last line... jan
You might want to get that looked at... maybe try some counseling? You reply to your own work, as if - I agree with everything Tomboy has stated... all of your writes are a stab at some commentator or critic on your previous writes, and it seems your writes are intended to cause controversy on the site, animosity between writers, and then at the same time, you apologize for having done such a deed... I ask you nicely to write something of poetic value and stop this childishness on the site, because if you don't I may be forced to overlook your first amendment right
Submission Name: Mozart and Music
