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    dots Submission Name: break the skindots
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    Author: painfullyme
    ASL Info:    23/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 335/456/72
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    dotsbreak the skindots
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    Break the skin
    make it bleed
    cause my life
    to run through
    papercuts and
    tiny holes
    feel the pleasureful
    pain of a slice
    hear the blade as
    it cuts deeper
    deeper until
    the pain outweighs
    the pleasure
    make it hurt
    enough to
    prove i'm still alive
    prove to me
    that life hasn't
    left me for dead
    make me
    believe that
    i do truly exist
    my knife
    my blade
    my friend
    *




    Submitted on 2004-11-10 23:13:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whoa. I hope you don't do this. It's a horrible thing to do. I've never done it but I wrote about it. In my poem Again. I wrote it to try to find out why people did it. Good write. I like the format. It goes well with the piece. I liked this part the most,
    "cause my life
    to run through
    papercuts and
    tiny holes
    feel the pleasureful
    pain of a slice"
    :)
    -blt
    | Posted on 2004-11-11 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't belive you used the catagory marking "cutting/mutilation" ...I find it odd that it's even there. For one the poem is already blatantly put enough. The poem is kinda weak to me, there is not much but the obvious. i cut myself to feel. you can do better. Bleeding is great by the way. Especialy mixed with rock and roll.

    p.s.- why do they think you are suicidal? I didn't get that from it. you cut yourself to feel alive, not make yourself dead...Duh
    | Posted on 2004-11-11 00:00:00 | by Ratmeat | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. Such a great peom. I know how you feel and i prolly would even though i really dont have a reason to do it. I dont think its really worth it because yea life it tough, (yes i am only 15... i have had many freinds think of it including me) But you need to move on. One of my friends friends committed suicide. I sure hope you never think of that. I'll definatly pray for you and all the others like you. Your are only 22, you've got a lot of life ahead of you. Keep your chin up ( gah i hate that... -.-) but Just do it.

    keep on writing!!
    | Posted on 2004-11-11 00:00:00 | by Maki | [ Reply to This ]



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