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    dots Submission Name: One Momentdots
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    Author: Martine
    ASL Info:    22/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 28/30/11
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 362
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 521



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       Bah. another old one. even though i don't really like any of my old poetry... it has a lot of meaning to me.


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    dotsOne Momentdots
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    One moment of happiness
    And an eternity of misery
    Lift yourself up
    And hold your head high
    Laugh at something funny
    Cry when you’re sad
    Immune to feeling
    Immune to pain
    Like a machine
    With a daily routine
    You do so much
    Yet nothing gets done
    No time to sleep
    No time to yourself
    What can u do but
    Lift yourself up
    And hold your head high
    Continue what you’ve started
    And forget what you’ve done.




    Submitted on 2004-11-10 23:30:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this "one moment" is the experience of life. we all go through misery and have small moments of true happiness. the range of emotion conveyed in your work is truly what we all feel inside. life is one long miserable moment, but happiness is a short piece of that time. good job.
    | Posted on 2004-11-11 00:00:00 | by dark_and_dreary | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really true...its like a pep talk that everyone should give themselves. short and sweet and a good write. nice job.

    -sweet
    | Posted on 2004-11-11 00:00:00 | by sweet-fire | [ Reply to This ]



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