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    dots Submission Name: Together-Notdots
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    Author: Raksha
    ASL Info:    16/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 75/67/29
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 279
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       something I a not found of but I will post it anyways-


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    dotsTogether-Notdots
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    Between the barened streets I am lost.
    Lost in the memories of you and me.
    The plesurable moments of long nights spent-the long life together that should of never started.
    The angish that would become.
    The holes in the walls created,
    each one representing the emptiness in me,
    and what I have become,
    In result of your being of existance.
    I am here now drenched and lying,dying,screaming for your end.




    Submitted on 2004-11-13 13:44:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Contrariwise to the last comment- the last lyne was really the only one I liked- “I am here now drenched and lying, dying ,screaming for your end.” That’s just beautiful! ~#6-
    | Posted on 2004-11-13 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]



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