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    dots Submission Name: On Dropzone LightBringerdots
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    Author: Lightbringer
    ASL Info:    25/M/under your couch
    Elite Ratio:    4.63 - 188/210/36
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 331
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 536



    Description:
       I posted this in one of the forums and thought it was worth posting. The challenge was to describe the scene out my window. I hope you all like it. Tell me what you think.


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    dotsOn Dropzone LightBringerdots
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    Dropzone LightBringer is strewn
    With red and orange Faerie paratroopers.
    They lay dead where they've fallen
          on the gravel path.
    A calico sniper, a twitching tail
          his only visible movement,
    Creeps up behind
          a careless red breasted General.
    All this, while acorn artillery
          Pummels the earth on all sides.




    Submitted on 2004-11-13 16:15:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I aways knew squirrls were military spys.
    They way they move you'd think they were sneaking around on you. plus I think those nuts they bury are really cameras.
    So if that is what you see outside your window where do you live . The Phipipeans? or amybe Iraq? oh well I like the very discriped words you used, you must have gotten an A.
    Cant wait to read more from you.
    Kacey
    | Posted on 2004-11-14 00:00:00 | by Lachesis | [ Reply to This ]
      oh wow, what a unique and wonderful way to depict such a simple thing as the scene out your window. it's very easy to tell you have a creative poetic mind. Anyway, i thought this was great. Take care my friend and i hope to hear from you... adios! Travis
    | Posted on 2004-11-30 00:00:00 | by Mwa Ha Ha Ha Ha | [ Reply to This ]



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