this is insightful and wonderful and beautiful, and I love you for writing this. oops. lol. no seriously this is tight. I love the message. and once again, you show signs of definite blossom. God what a relief to read some good stuff from you. that isn't four lines, and four stanzas. Thank you Lord.
It's intriguing. The shallow or not thinking person could not grasp this poem. It's interesting in that is explain so little and so much. I was instantly draw by that first line, no extraordinary things were said, but it seemed to call for the rest of it to be read.
a very thoughtful and insightful piece of creative writing that i could not agree with more.your words are a great source of relief to me and to others who can accept your message.good luck and fare well.