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    dots Submission Name: To Hold a Grudgedots
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    Author: eener
    ASL Info:    21/f/wi
    Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 351/370/53
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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    Description:
       Inspired by people who hold grudges. Who loses more, the grudge taker, or the grudge giver?


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    dotsTo Hold a Grudgedots
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    To inflict harm without intent
    Is to suffer forevermore
    At the hands of the victim

    To never be forgiven
    Is to drown in guilt
    In the eyes of the victim

    To change oneself
    Is to learn from mishap
    Going unnoticed by the victim

    To newly attempt peace
    Is to act in vain
    In the mind of the victim

    To move on to better things
    Is to let alone
    The victim of the victim




    Submitted on 2004-11-13 20:13:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is insightful and wonderful and beautiful, and I love you for writing this. oops. lol.
    no seriously this is tight. I love the message. and once again, you show signs of definite blossom.
    God what a relief to read some good stuff from you. that isn't four lines, and four stanzas.
    Thank you Lord.
    | Posted on 2004-11-14 00:00:00 | by max | [ Reply to This ]
      It's intriguing. The shallow or not thinking person could not grasp this poem. It's interesting in that is explain so little and so much. I was instantly draw by that first line, no extraordinary things were said, but it seemed to call for the rest of it to be read.
    | Posted on 2004-11-13 00:00:00 | by Mercy December | [ Reply to This ]
      a very thoughtful and insightful piece of creative writing that i could not agree with more.your words are a great source of relief to me and to others who can accept your message.good luck and fare well.
    | Posted on 2004-11-13 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]


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