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    dots Submission Name: Random Angerdots
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    Author: Wonder Passing
    ASL Info:    16/Female/NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 143/162/37
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 196
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 175



    Description:
       I just read a friend's poem, which bothered me. That was all.


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    dotsRandom Angerdots
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    Look in the mirror
    Can you see through the twisted image?
    Where's the light you once had
    Once it's broken
    Some things can't be fixed




    Submitted on 2004-11-13 21:15:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Look in the mirror
    Can you see through the twisted image?
    Where's the light you once had
    Once it's broken
    Some things can't be fixed

    I'll have to disagree. I'm not sure what kind've light you're talking about here, but I'll just assume that "breaking the light" is "making a mistake."

    That can definately be undone.

    Was their poem derogatory toward you? Do you feel the need for a rebuttle?

    I'm not asking you to change your entry or whatever here, but include a little more information in the description. Not so the entry makes more sense, but because I generally want to know what this person wrote about that pissed you off so bad.

    If you're even pissed, that is. Maybe you're sad and you're hurt that the person did this? Maybe they contradicted things they've said before which is why you referenced the mirror?

    I don't know.

    Reply to this please and let me know the story. I'm curious in finding out what made you write this short piece with a large description. :)

    On a side note, I was just thinking that maybe this person was happy at one point in their life and now they've changed so much they're unrecognizable. Is that the purpose of looking through the twisted image in the mirror?

    Because they've distorted who they are?

    Ok enough guesses from me.

    Reply to this and let me know.
    Rob
    | Posted on 2004-11-13 00:00:00 | by Me Rambling | [ Reply to This ]


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