I must say, this is one original write. "Because all we know is what we are good at And all we are good at is all we are" This took me aback. How true these words are. Of course, not all are like that, but a great mass I must admit. "Exit Creativity Enter Conformity You're only clapping because everyone else is" This made me chuckle. Again, very true. This is something that almost anyone can relate to without a doubt.
Thank you by the way for your comment regarding the world as it will never be. Thank you for your helpful suggestions; I used them. I am glad you enjoyed it, for I feared the contrary. Take care.
cool...i can relate to the whole poem. the last line confused me for a moment. lol. oh well, it made me think. i loved the second stanza.
Exit Creativity Enter Conformity Because your only clapping since everyone else is
i loved that part. but the word "since" just doesn't sound right in that line. it should be "because" but you used that in the beginning. hmmm...i don't know...it's your poem. a great one at that.
This is an interesting piece, short, but interesting. There are a few things that I could think to add, but overall it gives an interesting view. And when the reader stops to think, they can see themselves through that view.
Because you're only clapping since everyone else is
wow. this piece was beautiful. it can have so many different meanings to so many different people but has one common message: the world that we wish for is just that, a wish. excellent write i'll enjoy reading more of your work.
Submission Name: Exit Sanity
