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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I wish, sometimes, that I couldn't see;
    then, maybe, I could feel.
    I wish, sometimes, that I couldn't feel;
    then, maybe, I could see.
    I wish I no longer had to wish for anything.
    I wish I felt complete.






    Submitted on 2004-03-15 02:25:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      great message in so short a write. i tend to wish my life away sometimes instead of just being happy with what i've got. thanks for the message!
    | Posted on 2004-03-17 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I feel this way too sometimes. Wanting everything at your disposal without the burden of its ownership...embark on a journey where you know nothing can happen to you, but there plenty peril to triumph over...we all want life that way I think, secretly...but really its no secret at all to you. Beautiful work cuddled...I missed reading your stuff.
    -MyX
    | Posted on 2004-03-15 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]


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