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    dots Submission Name: Being medots
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    Author: Emerging Soul
    ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240/1114/244
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
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    dotsBeing medots
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    Don't you realize
    That the option should be mine?
    To knowingly take the risk
    If I so choose.
    But then you've never understood
    My need to be
    The master of my own fate
    The keeper of my own flame
    All of my life
    I have had to answer to someone
    All the while
    Railing against the
    Chains that bind me
    Not to escape
    But just to be set loose
    So that I may stay here
    Of my own free will
    And come and go as I please
    When did love (love?)
    Give you
    Dominion over me?
    If only you knew what it was like
    To be me.




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      A great way to state this, a concept too many people feel, and don't understand how to get out of it all. Sometimes I think I crave affection and that's the reason why I stay, but I just don't know, but I finally left my last relationship, and I wish I could say I am happier, but maybe it takes time, for I miss the affection, but not the violence. Anyways, I love the structure, and eachline, I also like how you questined the llove part, very fitting. great write.
    takecare
    much love
    kaity
    | Posted on 2004-12-14 00:00:00 | by Kaitylizzy | [ Reply to This ]
      you are very much your own person and i someone whom yuo love or claims to love you back is making you feel trapped then they don't love you at all. Get away, it's not that hard, it just takes some time.
    | Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by ashlee_jane2003 | [ Reply to This ]
      good piece of either personal os someones thoughts hard to walk away from loves boundries put on by others All in all we allow this to happen until it gets overwhelming enough to stand back up and say or piece.well written
    sandman
    | Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Im a firm beleiver in controlling your own fate, in a relationship their should definitely be freedom to be who you are. One of the components of love is trust and in order for things to work it must be honored and respected. I think this is a very good and personal poem.
    | Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by The Black Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      and the soul continues to emerge through your writings, this, just like everything else of yours I've read is awesome. Even in love we must always retain our individuality, after all isn't that what they fell in love with in the first place? hmmmm...nicely done...Bob:)
    | Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well put. The idea that love should give the right to hold reign over another is all to rampant on these pages. Each person in a relationship should demand the right to be themselves.
    | Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by arkay | [ Reply to This ]


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