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Bad days seem to forever repeat Dreamscapes of beauty replete And here I am at a loss So much anger, So much rage Needing the euphoria of Gage I long for comfort A comforting touch But all I ask is far too much The smile of a familiar stranger makes me feel a lesser danger And when I call upon my friends so dear They attempt to wipe away my every fear But with numero uno possessing failure quitting is the new fad of the day There is no dusting No trying twice And the edges begin to fray Confusion, frustration... A crumbling foundation With an unknown destination In a world of comdemnation Remains aspirations and my adoration for confirmation That I'm still sane That I can still maintain... |
I liked this much, it has a smooth steady flow. Sometimes I'm amazed most people manage to stay sane, or something that looks like it. The last stanza finishes this poem quite well. Nice write.| Posted on 2004-11-17 00:00:00 | by Lostinbeer | [ Reply to This ] | |