Hea, keep it simple, this has no licking, no lashing and especcially it was mostly tongue in cheek. Sex, has no part in this tasteful drama, no where did I see the mention of whipped cream or chocolate fudge icing pooled around the belly button and thighs or for that matter on a toe even! No, I cannot see how any one might contrive a scene of illicit activity by the mere mention of a long moist suculant member working its way across the minds eye into the dark crevices of our sick and demented mind! Not at all. Actually, the mention of "serpent'ine", brought out the evil in me! Hahaaa. Great work, really, without all the kidding around, this says so much in so few words, WOW.
defined by sensation, pleasure, all that. scorpion is right, this could take on several meanings. come to think of it, yeah, tongue is real good. anyway now i'm just being a perv, sorry ma'am.
i like the one liner approach. it makes somthing seem not right and that makes you think about what it really says and why it says that. i kinda possible maybe agree with amber though...the way it reads i think you got em basakwards. again though. i like the one line thingy.
good piece, whichever one the poem is. lol. ^5 talk to you soon. PS
How we use our tongue for tasting, yet also to define things? Nice short poem about a important part of our bodies. . This could take on several meanings actually.
i believe that you got your poem and your description in the wrong place.. i thought it was a nice simple poem.. a way of describing the tongue in its simplest of forms.. i believe that it could be elaborated upon if you wanted to shed even more light upon this wondeful part of the body ~*~amber~*~
It is diificult to convey much in a short piece, but you pulled it off here. The work evokes a great imagery as well as a feeling of sensuality, nice work.
Submission Name: Tongue
. This could take on several meanings actually.