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    dots Submission Name: A Poem About Nothingdots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Poem About Nothingdots
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    I am nothing,
    A non entity
    Zero value, me
    Half the price of free
    Worthless, you see…
    Paling insignificance
    Into non-existence,
    I am of no consequence
    Nought out of nought
    An empty thought
    I am nothing




    Submitted on 2004-11-18 07:59:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      do you really feel that way?
    your poem is straight to the point, and as said before really nails it don.
    but damn! talk about bringing depression on a silver platter. but yeah i really like your poem
    | Posted on 2004-11-19 00:00:00 | by frank bazaya | [ Reply to This ]
      Actually I could...this was in answer to a challenge form another poet.. It claimed how difficult it was to write a poem about nothing. So I met the challenge, not in that nothing place I assure you lol!
    | Posted on 2004-11-18 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]


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