Description: this is about my love-the way he loves me is just beautiful to me...i tried to put it into words but i guess words just cant describle the beauty of true love.
The way you love me -------------------------------------------
Your kisses softly search
Deep within my soul.
With you, im complete
You make me a whole.
Hands so slow and tender
Sends shivers down my spine.
True love wanted to reach me
And you were my sign.
Your love healed my heart
It was broken and haunted.
You lifted up my mind
It’s no longer taunted.
The warmth of your embrace
Promises never to let go.
The truth of your words
Gently tells me that its so.
You bravely fight away
All of my deepest fears.
With the tip of your fingers
You wipe away my tears.
I fell fast and deep in love
At my first sight of you.
You want to always love me
I pray that this stays true.
that really hits the spot there that is the way true love feels and this another good to read you have made it a possible for me to think that maybe there is someone else in the world for me to truely love and them love me back just as much
very nice! really liked, and thats coming from a real romantic so... lol. i could feel the words as i read on and it was one of those poems that you dont want to end. though i liked the poem as a whole my fave lines were these. i could really feel the shivers.
'Hands so slow and tender Sends shivers down my spine. True love wanted to reach me And you were my sign.'
maybe you could try not rhyming and expressing love in a more serious way (i dunno if thats the correct way to put it). just write everything that comes out of your heart without thinking of how it sounds. work on it later. this usually works for me. try it. anyway, well done. enjoyed that.
awww...this was very good kayla... i want to say beautiful, but then you'd think i was weird, lol:P Have you showed this to steven yet? When did you write it? Hey, i wrote a few *love* poems once, for J...never showed them to anyone tho, cept him...oh well, thats a lost cause from the start...walmart here i come, lol, im kinda hyper today:P:)
Cute. Really good poetry. I think that you would have better luck expressing your love if tried to write a poem that isn't all rhymes. Just write how you feel. If it rhymes, it rhymes, if it doesn't, then it doesn't. But I like this one. It has a cuteness but a seriousness also. Good write.
Submission Name: The way you love me
