Im stuck,
On your scent.
Hooked,
Im your bait.
Use me,
Then let me go.
Im not strong enough to go.
I melt in your presence,
But you keep me at a distance.
Im sick…
But then, so are you.
Just let me go.
Good write :) I can apply this to a current situation of my own so i really related to it.. i also loved the line hooked im your bait... keep writing :)
Ah, this is a well written short poem, I truly like how you expressed your emotion throughout the poem. Its the sort of write that you dont know of you should add more or to leave as is, as your mind wants it to be...you know, but in this case I think the simplicity complements the meaning this poem gets across, I really enjoyed this write poetsoul and look foward to more of you postings. Anyways, keep writing, and take care!
Submission Name: sick
