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    dots Submission Name: Like That Feelingdots
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    Author: frank bazaya
    ASL Info:    24/m/uk
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 10/12/5
    Words: 328
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       this is something i wrote when i feel in love, but knew my feelings were going one stream. im sure there are a lot of us who always seem to meet that right person, but awkwardly enough that person never feels the same. when all you can think about is that one. when all you want is told her and have lots of fun. these are my thoughts, i share...


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    dotsLike That Feelingdots
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    Like that feeling….

    Like that feeling when you know you’re in love…
    Does it not feel like a blessing from high above.
    When you truly know she is the one…
    A smile of thoughtful joy, the sentiments of fun.
    Like that feeling when you hold my hand
    A picture of you and me, frolicking in the sand.
    The way you touch my soul makes me so glad…
    Despite the thoughts of how life’s so sad

    Like that feeling when you know its real…
    The blessing…your touch, the way it heals.
    A moment in time…I’ll look into your eyes,
    Let the whole world despise…you and I are gonna ride.
    Let the thoughts subside let emotions collide…
    A lover’s pride, I miss you so much I could die inside.

    Like that feeling when I kiss your lips…
    Close your eyes, as I wrap my hands around your hips.
    Is our love for keeps, the realism slumber and sleeps.
    ….
    But the hill seems so steep, but my emotions run so deep.
    The dreams that leave me confused…
    The battles that have left me bruised.

    Like that feeling when the world no longer becomes appealing…
    A losing battle, my eyes constantly to the ceiling,
    Sensations my body will keep concealing.
    You know the feeling, when I want to be with you…
    The thoughts of leaving you make my heart so blue.
    Even though you knew, how my feelings were so true.

    Like that feeling when I yearn to hear your voice…
    When all I want to do is hold you close,
    Tell you that to me you mean the most.
    ….
    But like that feeling, when you start to realise…
    The fallacies of this dry as reality.
    My heart seized…a lover’s fatality.
    Like that feeling, when there’s unification…
    A moment of a blissful sensation,
    When it’s coming straight from the heart,
    Wishing somehow you to, could have felt like that…
    LIKE THAT FEELING




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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh sade and wonderous all at the same time. Hope she came somewhere like that feeling. She certainly missed out! Did you have jealousy dreams? Thought provokng though I did get confused as the tone turned down then up then down again in the last four verses. Enjoyed the ride though.
    | Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. this was amazing writing. you really took me on a trip. the first half, i found myself smiling at the picture you were drawing, then i found myself surprised and even saddened. i hope she knows what you felt too!
    | Posted on 2004-11-19 00:00:00 | by soadman | [ Reply to This ]



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