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    dots Submission Name: To know you...dots
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    Author: frank bazaya
    ASL Info:    24/m/uk
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 10/12/5
    Words: 287
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 319
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       again here i stand, exposing my feelings to the world, this poem might at first glance not make a lot of sense, but for me it was a point of confusion. iam in a relationship were i can really never be sure how i feel, how she feels. were we stand. if anyone can make sense of it and you think you can relate please feel free to comment. maybe even a word of advice i wouldnt mind.


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    To know you….

    To know you a feeling I wish I could relate,
    I’ve been hurt so long, can your touch compensate.
    Emotions making me irate…
    Pardon if I feel to hesitate, my feelings I wish I could relate.

    A new day has dawned
    Feelings to which I can no longer prolong
    But I will keep holding on,
    Like a broken record…
    It’s the same old song.

    To look into your eyes…
    Emotions I can’t comprehend,
    To hold your hand…
    These feelings I can’t understand.

    Dazed in illusion,
    Caught up in so much confusion.
    Lost in life’s conception…
    This world, filled with so much deception.

    Far from mind, your sight is blind
    I reach out to you…deal with my kind.
    For so long I’ve sought,
    Now to me fate has brought.
    To know you…surely the greatest gift?
    Is this a lie…don’t be the reason I die.
    Be with me the season I fly…
    Kiss me here and now and let me reach the sky.

    My darling to be, what you are to me,
    A feeling of glee, happiness forever to thee.
    Praise to you…
    Clear my mind like the skies so blue.
    Yes its true, no other way this message can go through.

    A spark of life, the torch is lit
    Here I stand, fully equipped with loves kit
    My love for you, I’ll never be ashamed to admit.

    To know you a feeling I wish I could relate,
    I’ve been hurt so long, can your touch compensate.
    Emotions making me irate…
    Pardon if I feel to hesitate, let my mind contemplate
    My feelings I wish I could relate…







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