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    dots Submission Name: High Paris Societydots
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    Author: max
    ASL Info:    27 m tennessee
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 152/191/55
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHigh Paris Societydots
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    In the Paris Society of the last district,
    in corroboration with Dr. Brewer
    for the fifth verse of play!!

    Skipping to the evening muse,
    going to the big show,
    hop-scotching to the banquet
    I found a gun in the red hankerchief
    of a Brigadier General

    on the first verse of this rap
    High Paris Society was a'swinging
    on us all with a red cap on,
    the Brigadier General is dead.




    Submitted on 2004-11-19 19:34:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      why do people think that every poem has to mean something, or have a message to it, or that it is a true account of an experience that writer had?
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    | Posted on 2004-11-19 00:00:00 | by max | [ Reply to This ]
      I ain't clearing up [censored] and I ain't explaining [censored]. this is for fun, this is for entertainment.

    it doesn't mean anything secret, there is no hidden message.

    it is simply a poem of entertainment.
    | Posted on 2004-11-19 00:00:00 | by max | [ Reply to This ]
      i love quirky poetry like this. even though i don't fully understand it ::gasp:: i still love it. i love the idea of hopscotching somewhere and the red hankercheif...but maybe you could clear the isdea up for me a bit- i think id enjoy it more if i knew what as going on
    | Posted on 2004-11-19 00:00:00 | by NoMoreGoodbyes | [ Reply to This ]


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