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    dots Submission Name: Confuseddots
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    Author: wretched_muse
    ASL Info:    20/f/OH
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 182/205/64
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       yeah problems in my life just. thought that id get them out.


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    dotsConfuseddots
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    I’m confused
    Do I sit back and watch
    Or jump in and start something
    Should I say what’s on my mind
    Or should I hold it all inside
    Can you help me with this?
    Or should I look elsewhere
    I’m lost and dazed
    Not knowing what to do
    You set in silence not saying a word
    While I ponder over what to do next
    This cant go on
    Tell me…
    Can I help?
    Should I stay?
    Am I good?
    Tell me, talk to me
    Don’t leave me in this insanity
    I don’t know what to do when I’m here
    I’m confused.




    Submitted on 2004-11-19 23:56:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ahhh well I have to say the way you presented the write with the effect goes very nicely with the title. confusion and reading this is do say that I have that feeling of what the heck is going on here? I am talking effect though not context. don’t send a squad of ninja assassins over to my house confusion can take a person over and make them feel helpless. confusion has been used effectively in warfare, a confused enemy is a vulnerable one. the question asked the not knowing what to do or how to act. the tight situations we get ourselves into that begin this process of confusion. many thing though can spawn that state. in my worst cases I don’t know who I am or where I am at but I am a little nutso anyway ha ha. my confusion is followed by that horrible memory loss and then my problem is more than just confusion but can also launch me into despair and sometimes self loathing. very good effect with this write and capturing the nature of confusion,

    ~mike
    | Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow that was another expression of ones confusion... you just burst out all the questions playing in your mind which made the confusions letting go in you. that was great it reminds of my self either. very impressive, i love it.
    | Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by eidnyc d_ noble | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, I guess all I can really say is congratulations: you've just summed up the life of every person in the world. It's a nice organization of the chaos in your brain, and I like the overall way it's structured. Very nice, and oh so true!
    | Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by Scribbles1338 | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece reminds me of a situation I've been in recently. It might not be the same type of situation you were in, but mine involved friends being mean to me. I was confused on if they wanted me to talk or scream or ignore them. They were ignoring me. UGH I hate that. Needless to say we aren't speaking. Anyway, interesting piece. :)
    -blt
    | Posted on 2004-11-19 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]



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