this gorgeous... its a snap shot in the middle of a hellish world... its the truth also... the most beautiful smile is one forced through tears... not forced as in not meant but just like a sacrifice through the tears... everyone seems to be saying make it into a poem... i think it has huge poem potential but i also think it is simply perfect as it is here... you make sure you show it to Jake if possible...
ohhh this is really a nice qoute; this is really for everyone... you can elaborate this and make it a piece. maybe this will bring up a good thought of being in a really worst situation... think more of it it's pretty nice qoute!
i agree... a smile is a smile... but a smile that has so much weight to carry deserves a spot in the hall of fame... just the thought of struggling allows so much to pass through.
Aww This is a cute quote. Did you think of it yourselve? Sometimes I'll think of a line of poetry before I write the rest of it. This could make a good poem. :) -blt
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