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Author: Scribbles1338
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This one's for you Jake.


...After all, the most beautiful smile is one which is forced to struggle through tears...

Submitted on 2004-11-20 00:18:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this gorgeous... its a snap shot in the middle of a hellish world... its the truth also... the most beautiful smile is one forced through tears... not forced as in not meant but just like a sacrifice through the tears...
everyone seems to be saying make it into a poem... i think it has huge poem potential but i also think it is simply perfect as it is here... you make sure you show it to Jake if possible...
| Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  ohhh this is really a nice qoute; this is really for everyone... you can elaborate this and make it a piece. maybe this will bring up a good thought of being in a really worst situation... think more of it it's pretty nice qoute!
| Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by eidnyc d_ noble | [ Reply to This ]
  i agree... a smile is a smile... but a smile that has so much weight to carry deserves a spot in the hall of fame... just the thought of struggling allows so much to pass through.
| Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]
  Aww This is a cute quote. Did you think of it yourselve? Sometimes I'll think of a line of poetry before I write the rest of it. This could make a good poem. :)
| Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]

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