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    dots Submission Name: Love is selfish.dots
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    Author: Abby Sinthetic
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 177/230/53
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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       I have been watching too much television....


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    dotsLove is selfish.dots
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    I love you,
    You have money.
    I love you,
    Fuck me.
    I love you.
    You are an icon.
    I love you.
    Fuck me.

    I love you.
    You have what I do not.
    You have what I want.
    Love is selfish.




    Submitted on 2004-11-20 19:12:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      little miss courtney love;) too much tv is bad but it is inspiring(silver lining), it makes you want to change the sad world we live in. love is selfish but the best and mythically "real" love is a shared selfishness.

    maybe i'm full of [censored].
    | Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by joe quinn | [ Reply to This ]
      wow... ive come across this idea that love is selfish a coupla times this last week but not presented so bluntly and forcefully... i like it!
    "i love you" will get you anything... its almost like you have the first and third lines are girls and the 2nd and 4th are boys... usually thats how it goes anyways... boys will say anything to get sex but yeah... whther you meant that or not i think its very clever.
    awesome stuff! i love the way you just came out and said it! why water it down?!
    | Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree. in today's world when was the last time love was just love. a lot of people chase a life of falsified love that they force on themselves for the money/fame/title/superiority.
    when in history was love evr meant to be a mockary of what it is. its meant to be a special bond and feeling between two people. but thats not what goes through these peoples mind. the true meaning of love is lost on those people, and if the youths of today continue to believe everything on tv... love will be forever lost to them as well. very good write. it instills passion and insite. great!
    | Posted on 2004-11-20 00:00:00 | by butterfly wings | [ Reply to This ]


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