One Bite of The Cherry -------------------------------------------
Fruit bursts.
Eruptions of flavour,
savoured in
licking waves.
Tingling in depths,
Taste buds;
With relish,
Hunger growls.
Scrumptious,
Luscious,
Delicious.
A mouth is alive
from one bite
of the cherry.
Love the double meaning, love the way its written, it is simple, elegant and intelligent, suggestive without being vulgar - very nicely done, my favourite kind of piece, somewhat innocent and still sensual ^_^
well, on one level, it can be just about biting a cherry nad hungering for it and on the next level... well, just reading the first few lines, i had a lil bit of an idea as to what you're saying...
a very nice written light poem that brings a cheer to ones mind with its simplicity and clearness it makes one feel enjoyment while his eyes travel through it , well done :)
Do I sense some form of double entendre here? Maybe it's just my one track mind. A very well written and accurate description either way. Easy and fun to read. Thanx for your words. =Jimma=
this is quite an odd poem yet easy to understand.because you have received so many comments on it already that seem to have covered all the bases,i will not say anymore.good luck and fare well.
Submission Name: One Bite of The Cherry
