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    dots Submission Name: I Fear Not Lovedots
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    Author: Jimma
    ASL Info:    22/m/Melb Aust
    Elite Ratio:    4.75 - 217/234/54
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 827
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    Description:
       Another soppy love poem about someone who will probably never read it. Ya know.....


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    dotsI Fear Not Lovedots
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    I fear not the consequences
    Of my love
    For in my souls deepest reach
    I am confident
    That no ill can come
    From such love as this
    A love of fiery intensity
    Untainted by the petty
    Stains of self-interest
    Unmarred by the grip of lust
    Just an insatiable yearning
    To bring her joy
    Gnawing at my heart
    How can such love be wrong?
    I ignore the vicious barbs
    Of those who would tell me
    It should not be
    Not merely momentary longing
    But an eternal love
    Do I feel in my breast
    She is more sacred to me
    Than any other belief I hold
    Any god
    Any kingdom
    Any loyal oath
    I would turn my back to them all
    In her name
    I fear not the wrath of god
    Thus I fear not the consequences
    Of a love I hold so dear




    Submitted on 2004-11-21 04:34:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a very moving poem, I like your choice of layout as a background for an ever loved topic. And though I am a bit partial to love poetry by men, this is a fantastic peice of work!Bravo!
    write on, my young friend...Ruthie
    | Posted on 2004-12-14 00:00:00 | by ruthiejuers | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey there. This is a beautifully written poem. Love is such a complex emotion. And I find that no matter how many times I try and write about it, I never seem to manage to find words that satiate the feeling behind them. Anyhoo...great write. Much love to ya.
    | Posted on 2004-11-21 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]
      I ignore the vicious barbs
    Of those who would tell me
    It should not be
    Not merely momentary longing
    But an eternal love
    Do I feel in my breast
    She is more sacred to me
    Than any other belief I hold

    I've definately been there. I was told for so long, by so many people that my wife and I weren't meant to be. But I never listened. I always had this beautiful vision of our love in my mind that no one could've taken away from me. Of course, that all crumbled and it turns out they were completely right, but that's beside the point. I know where you're at right now mentally. Don't listen to anything but your heart (which is what you're already doing.)

    Good piece and good write, vocal gymnist.

    Rob
    | Posted on 2004-11-21 00:00:00 | by Me Rambling | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand this poem completely. I write poems about my love who will never read beacause she is famous and on the other side of the world.
    | Posted on 2004-11-21 00:00:00 | by vvv | [ Reply to This ]


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