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    dots Submission Name: Earwormdots
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    Author: Ontlogicalamity
    ASL Info:    33/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    4.67 - 190/194/45
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Comedy
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    Bytes: 86



    Description:
       And now something to lighten the mood. And if you don't know, an earworm is when you get a song stuck in your head. SO ANNOYING!


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    dotsEarwormdots
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    I am an earworm.
    I lodge myself in your brain.
    You won't forget me.




    Submitted on 2004-11-22 15:20:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I hate having songs stuck in my head. When I'm in public I wonder around singing which ever one is stuck in my head really loudly (and my friend claims I'm afriad to singin public...) and then people look at me and I'm like, *sing*
    | Posted on 2004-11-25 00:00:00 | by Cigarette Smoke | [ Reply to This ]
      Dude I have a hive of earworms that must be living in my hair cause I always have songs stuck in my head...ITS so aggrevating to have a song in the head, you only remember one verse and AHHHHH, D@mn you and this haiku Its in my brains!
    | Posted on 2004-11-23 00:00:00 | by Mithrandir | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I hate songs like that. Sometimes I walk around singing god-awful pop songs. I'm almost embarrassed to say I like Tilly and the Wall, but I do. Hey, at least I don't like Ashlee Simpson (I'd want to shoot myself if I did). I thought of the Wrath of Kahn too.
    | Posted on 2004-11-23 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      You just made me so, so very happy. My impression is that this was hilarious, and no one would have the ability to read this without being instantly amused.
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by dreamexandra | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha, I hate those. Especially when I'm trying to sleep. Anyways, great write. And now I can not forget it. Crap...Well, mission accomplished, I guess.
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by Abby Sinthetic | [ Reply to This ]
      u are so very right...if something like that got into my brain i sure wouldn't forget. nice haiku, comedic, simple, and sweet.
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by Tinasha | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey there. Interesting little haiku. Very amusing. This brought a little humor into my day.

    I hate it when I get a song stuck in my head and I can't stop singing it. What's worse is when I've got MORE than one song stuck in my head at one time, which happens very frequently.

    Anyhoo...great write. Much love.
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]
      First impression: What? Wait a minute. What'd that say?
    I cracked up. I don't know if you intended for it to be comical, but it was. This poem IS an earworm, cause now I've got it stuck in my head.
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by Dark_Dancer | [ Reply to This ]


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