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    dots Submission Name: The greatest feelingdots
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    Author: Star_searcher
    ASL Info:    17/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 114/109/20
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 916
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsThe greatest feelingdots
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    Love is the greatest feeling,
    Love is like a play,
    Love is what I feel for you,
    Each and every day.

    Love is like a smile,
    Love is like a song,
    Love is a great emotion,
    That keeps us going strong.

    I love you with my heart,
    My body and my soul,
    I love the way I keep loving,
    Like a love I can't control.

    So remember when your eyes meet mine,
    I love you with all my heart,
    And I have poured my entire soul into you,
    Right from the very start.




    Submitted on 2004-11-22 15:50:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really enjoyed your poem. It just seemed to flow so beautifully and i can tell that it truly came from your heart. it's a very simple poem, but you get the point and it just speaks to the readers. congrats on this great poem!
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by E. M. Dougherty | [ Reply to This ]
      Simple, but nice. Sometimes, the only way to express your feeling is with clichés, and the reason they are clichés is because it's the only way people can describe it...am I making sense?
    Peace and Love, Mariah
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by Mariah | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't listen to the haters girl! This is cute. Sometimes it's is good to write something very simple and easy. I know that I myself like reading stuff that is easy to understand rather than some of the stuff that is put out. Write how you want to write. Always feel positive about it. That's the only way to move on and do bigger and better things.
    | Posted on 2004-11-22 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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