Description: I wrote this to my friend in this funny e-mail in about 5 seconds because she was talking about trees....just thought I'd post it for fun! Peace and Love, Mariah
Trees don't like Bees -------------------------------------------
I am a tree.
I hate bees.
If you are a bee.
Stay away from me.
A tree.
That was simple (witch I am a fan of-) and short (I tend to go on) and not vulgar at all (that’s all I ever am) so for me to say thys was pretty kewl is a big deal… It made me laugh- one of those ones that comes up out of nowhere and you weren’t expecting. Good show. -Oh, and someone said something about turning it into a haiku- that would probably work… Seeing as how it is nature and all… Peace, love and total supremacy ~#6-
Well, it is what it is, but I can't offer much critique. Perhaps if you were to structure it into a haiku it woud be more appropriate as poetry. The last line fragment didn't make sense. It just sits there looking for a couple more words to validate it.
it's crazy and i like it...very creative, very unique...who would have thought to speak in the point of view of a tree...bees do violate them if u really think about it. one of my favorites!
Submission Name: Trees don't like Bees
