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    dots Submission Name: Brick Peopledots
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    Author: words_can_heal
    ASL Info:    22 Female
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 79/111/22
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    Bytes: 586



    Description:
       this is written about frustrating people in my life. I wrote it about a year ago. Very angry at the time, evidently.

    Sorry about the language.


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    dotsBrick Peopledots
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    I know my faults.
    I can admit them.
    I dont embrace them and love them because 'they are part of who I am'.

    I believe that I can change.
    What did I say?
    CHANGE? Hell no....brick people dont ever want to change.
    They want to HATE themselves forever.
    Well I am done trying to save them.
    Enjoy your life of ignorant bliss, deceit, anger, self hate, pettyness, and superficiality.
    Thats a burden I am not carrying for you anymore.

    Change, or fuck...be a lonely lonely, bitch of a person.




    Submitted on 2004-11-22 21:09:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Iíma brick- hel- a cinderblock person! Iím the phreakiní Thing! Thys was strangely sweet. I wanna pat you on the hedÖ Peace, love and automatic rifles- ~#6-
    | Posted on 2004-11-30 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]


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