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    dots Submission Name: 2 minutes in the morning glorydots
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    Author: Tarek Refaat
    ASL Info:    24/m/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 370/508/212
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 555
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       a thought that came in a morning


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    dots2 minutes in the morning glorydots
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    2 minutes in the morning glory
    and now i start telling the story
    the story of a man who lives till our day
    and smiles and shines like the sun ray
    the man who gives his heart
    with no regards
    who gives his hand
    with no demand
    smiling and laughing mostly he does
    helping others is what he thinks about alot
    looking within the deeps of the soul
    learning to live
    and learn from the life
    called crazy
    and called insane
    called too old and too wise for his age..
    i smile at what they say about him and just think
    this is the life
    this is the story
    and am going to live to write all its lines..
    this the man
    and this is the story
    of the 2 minutes and the morning glory





    Submitted on 2004-11-23 14:56:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      My initial thought upon title to poem was abruptly changed as I got into your peom.
    (Title hadme thinking about a Morning Glory,as
    flower.)
    I liked 2minutes. It doesn't take much time to recall certain mentors. You made me want to meet this guy. Sounds like the image I have of my dad who went to gather his Glory.
    Good write on such short notice.
    | Posted on 2004-11-23 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your work, so, this is no surprise to me. You gave a good speech with rythm. I am not sure if this is about someone else or about yourself. Whoever it is sounds like a good person. A true gift to the world. (Like a Saint). Good job!
    | Posted on 2004-11-23 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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