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    dots Submission Name: juslisendots
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    Author: Tinasha
    ASL Info:    20/Female/Oklahoma City
    Elite Ratio:    3.96 - 100/142/41
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 957
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 357



    Description:
       sometimes we might think we're listening for an answer to a problem in our lives...when really we're just thinking about listening and our thoughts cloud our head so much we don't hear. so we need to listen to silence because maybe we need to just wait...and wait...and wait...and listen.


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    listen to the wind...
    can u hear it...
    i mean really?
    don't lie,
    don't cry if u can't,
    don't die if you want to but it just won't edify itself into a voice.
    just listen...
         to silence.

    it screams!




    Submitted on 2004-11-23 16:27:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh honey! I like it, but I don't know. I have read your other work and this doesn't seem like you. Everything alright? You did a good job on this really. It may be different but it is a good different. It's great to explore many different things. *****
    | Posted on 2004-11-23 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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