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    dots Submission Name: abortdots
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    Author: Tinasha
    ASL Info:    20/Female/Oklahoma City
    Elite Ratio:    3.96 - 100/142/41
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       very controverisal, yes i know...if your opinion is different, please don't beat me up because we don't see eye to eye...this is how i feel about abortion


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    To forfeit responsibility
    Emotional instability
              Is no excuse

    Physical incapability
              Is far from the truth
    But there is love
    A love for self
    Full of self and full of ish
    Increases the death rate on routine census
    How can one take a life before itís lived?
    Never knowing the joy it could give
    Thinking only about your current condition
    And pain your only reminiscence
    Life shut down before it starts
    No one year birthdays
    No beats of the heart
    Just a fetus denied a chance
    To breathe, a chance to eat
    A chance to walk
    A chance to talk
    A chance to hug
    A chance to love
    Because thereís not enough love inside of you
    To grant that chance
    Too constipated with self
    To take a glance
    At how detrimental of an effect it will have
    On an unlived life
    Real reality will never grab
    Because your reality
    Is quite insane
    Yes youíre to blame...




    Submitted on 2004-11-24 00:51:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice poem
    | Posted on 2006-09-20 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
      AMEN! STATE YOUR OPINION AND KEEP IT! I highly suggest you read my piece "Pro-Choice" and the comments there after. Prepare yourself for a bashing. I got quite a bit. But, know that if you need support I stand behind you 100%. I Basically got told since I don't have an opinion b/c I am a teenager and it doesn't agree with other people. Stay strong. Beautiful piece.
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      very touching how can anybody not give a chance of life if you don't want the baby there are other options but this is not a place for debate. Great job
    | Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very sensitive subject. I do not disagree with the statement you are trying to make. I do not look down on those who have to result with abortion. Now, if they are just having sex thinking "Oh, don't worry about a condom. I can always have an abortion." then, yes that is wrong. I know some female can't help the situation. Some really would like to be able to mother that child. But the circumstances are not all they should be. God says "Ask for forgiveness and you shall be forgiven." Some woman would rather thier child stay with God where it is safe. To be reunited later. Rather than to bring a child into a home or an environment that is not safe or ready. I understand your opinion. This was a great write. you really got the point across. I am not saying anything bad about your opinion. I have just seen too much and my heart is open to everyone.
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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