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    dots Submission Name: Imaginativedots
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    Author: Transcendancing
    Elite Ratio:    5.13 - 365/214/35
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Same word exercise, the last in this mini series... the sum of those pieces related to this are:
    "Devil's Advocate"
    "Passionate"
    "Holistic"
    Singular moments, inspiration and focus on that one particular thought... and hopefully, capturing it.


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    dotsImaginativedots
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    Beyond the bounds of reality
    Outside conscious thought
    Subjective rambles
    Of visionary perception
    I think.




    Submitted on 2004-11-24 01:56:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      there you have it! all packed nice and tight in so few words. me likey! i love all that stuff that is beyond the bounds of reality. that is where poetry comes from, me thinks!
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool. I really like this look at imagination-it shows you have some . I like how you did this; it's really an interesting way of doing this. Great job describing imagination.
    J
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by bentnotbroken | [ Reply to This ]
      A rather long description of imagination, but a brilliant use of metaphors very eloquently displayed. Very good job.
    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by arkay | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this, the rare task of a poet or philosopher is to receive something idea or knowledge that is "out of our minds" and make it intelligible to others. We are translators in effect, and we're expected to make it sound like art too. You have created the idea that says all this, so much more eloquently than I. Thanks for sharing, nansofast
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is a wonderful piece as far as content/theme goes. I felt that you needed some punctuation to separate thoughts...that would give more clarity to the piece and result in greater impact from your words. Cool piece
    | Posted on 2004-12-02 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      "I think" therefore I imagine. "beyond the bounds of reality". This is the purpose of Man's brains. They are not just for thinking, but for going beyond that to creating something from nothing. What a great way to express all this, and in so few words. Great write.

    Phil
    | Posted on 2004-11-27 00:00:00 | by phil askew | [ Reply to This ]



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