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    dots Submission Name: mean i amdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 618
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    dotsmean i amdots
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    Some people think Iím mean
    All I do is create a scene
    All I am is a teenage fiend
    come on get used to it mom
    I can't be seen
    only god can kill me
    This is the common theme
    "Some people think Iím mean
    but all I do is create a scene"

    There is no I in team but there is a I in mine
    I'm not being selfish
    I just want to survive in this cruel world.
    "Some people think I'm mean
    but all I do is create a scene"
    If I beat the shit out of you
    I'm not being mean
    look it at this way
    I'm teaching you a new lesson
    not to fuck with people like me.

    If I steal from you
    I'm not being mean
    I'm like robbin hood without the tights
    I steal from the rich and give it to the poor.

    IF I get your daughter pregant
    I'm not being mean
    It must of been the fragnace that got her on top of me.

    "Some people think I'm mean
    but all I do is create a scene"
    so every one stay the out of this scene.




    Submitted on 2004-11-24 15:49:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well [censored] max. I really do not understand why you wrote this at all. Or what its about. haha. I really have no clue and the harder I think about it the harder it is to figure it out. Keep growing as a writer.
    | Posted on 2004-11-29 00:00:00 | by FeelingAlive | [ Reply to This ]


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