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    dots Submission Name: Thankfuldots
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    Author: Laveina
    ASL Info:    18/f/Neverland
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 151/134/37
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 373
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 603



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       Ok, this is sorta half serious half joke, I know it's jumbled but i kinda like it messy....


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    dotsThankfuldots
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    Thankful I may be, for things of long ago,
    of stories great and, of candles all aglow
    But when I look at what we have,
    and how we live
    I bow my head in crying shame.
    What do we have to show pride for,
    lost lives and lost love,
    nothing more lies in store but death anger and hate,
    for what you sew is what you reap in the time of thanksgiving!

    So eat your turkey stuff your face,
    but take with you one small thing,
    what your eating you may become in this dying age

    ~not literally of course!




    Submitted on 2004-11-24 19:54:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      that was different. i think you mean "sow" instead of "sew," though. the way you say we are in a dying age, i could relate to that. it's like a culture of death, really. scary... and so much greed. ach! i take this time at Thanksgiving to count all my many blessings. insightful write!
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats pretty good I accually like the first part best.. Yeah I'm gonna check out your other writing now haha... = I'm weird like that
    | Posted on 2004-11-24 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]



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