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    dots Submission Name: Beauty of Blacknessdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is about a rather morbid guy I know. My friends and I call him "our dark friend."

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    dotsBeauty of Blacknessdots

    He said he wanted to know the entirety of the human condition,
    for the ugliness gives the beauty meaning and perspective.
    I thought he was mad
    with his stylish frown
    and his casually gloomy clothes.
    I was sure he was mad.
    He collected morbid photographs:
    his stories gave me chills.
    To me, art was always
    beauty and shimmering life,
    but now I know the beauty of the blackness.
    I know the silence from the music.
    I am whole.

    Submitted on 2004-03-18 01:40:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very ture concept... you have to acknowledge the bad to understand (wholly) the good. I wrote about the same thing in an essay titled "The taste of Victory" if you care to check it out. Another great write.
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
      I dont know why, but this really reminds me of somethig bright eyes. prolly just the mood I am in
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]

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