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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    Muhamad Ali once said
    "I float like a butterfly but sting like a bee"
    Well now i say
    "i'm the king of the ring"
    going to steal that bling right off your pinky ring
    Now come sing with me
    Watch out
    going to knock out some of your teeth
    I'm not a thug or thieve
    now "I float like a butterfly but sting like a bee"
    now watch out for me.




    Submitted on 2004-11-25 22:02:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i this.it shows how confident you are when it comes to fighting and that you are the champ.it shows your confident but not cocky.great write keep it up.im sure you will because i have already read your more recent work.lol
    | Posted on 2005-07-24 00:00:00 | by endmypain | [ Reply to This ]
      Bring it on. Ill kick your ass. haha. So I dont need to watch out for you but I will keep reading everything you put in here. Well keep writing. So far all of hit has been alright. Im gonna keep reading all of them though.
    | Posted on 2004-11-29 00:00:00 | by FeelingAlive | [ Reply to This ]


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