I'll have to agree with bentnotbroken in saying that this is the true definition of stolen kisses at least from what I've experienced since being blessed to fall in love. Thank you for such a beautiful piece.
i always have a problem with such short poems as i just start to get into them and then they end.not that you are at fault in any way.it was avery to the point message and i guess tha's all that really matters.good luck and fare well.
Nice job. This is one of the most accurate descriptions of a stolen kiss that I've ever read. Your word choice is phenomenal and the images and emotions evoked are dead on. If anyone's ever experienced this, they'll definitely understand where you're coming from. Great write. J
Great job... and the length as Torn Skirt put it is like a tease... and it does leave me wanting more... but it's so awesome it doesn't need more... simple and sweet and right to the point... can't wait to read more...