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Stolen Kiss


Author: arkay
ASL Info:    50+/m/Atl.Can
Elite Ratio:    4.84 - 450 /320 /56
Words: 322
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Not sure what I was doing here
Just counting sylables I guess. ;)


Stolen Kiss




Splendour
Surrender
To loves tender
temptations
of bliss

Savour
The flavour
Kisses untold
And stealing
some more





Submitted on 2004-11-26 07:30:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I'll have to agree with bentnotbroken in saying that this is the true definition of stolen kisses at least from what I've experienced since being blessed to fall in love. Thank you for such a beautiful piece.

Wynne Devereaux
| Posted on 2004-12-19 00:00:00 | by Wynne Devereaux | [ Reply to This ]
  i always have a problem with such short poems as i just start to get into them and then they end.not that you are at fault in any way.it was avery to the point message and i guess tha's all that really matters.good luck and fare well.
| Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice job. This is one of the most accurate descriptions of a stolen kiss that I've ever read. Your word choice is phenomenal and the images and emotions evoked are dead on. If anyone's ever experienced this, they'll definitely understand where you're coming from. Great write.
J
| Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by bentnotbroken | [ Reply to This ]
  Great job... and the length as Torn Skirt put it is like a tease... and it does leave me wanting more... but it's so awesome it doesn't need more... simple and sweet and right to the point... can't wait to read more...
| Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by xSweetestThingx | [ Reply to This ]
  he, did you realize you have some spelling mistakes?? just thought I'd let ya know.. :) but i really liked it... it makes me miss my ex...
~Amanda
| Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by AmandaLyn | [ Reply to This ]


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