A lyrical poem, gentle and with easy flowing ribbons and perfused with a soft glow of pastel colours. For a poem about the seasons, you obviously live in a very temperate climate. This is like one long early summer garden party, but fun and easy on the mind.
Ok! To me this was more an exercise in rhyming than a salute to the seasons. All those words and only passing reference to the actual seasons. Maybe I was expecting something depicting the actual seasons as they can each easily be celebrated. Tha rhythm seems to flow well, however you did miss the rhyming in the second stanza.
i thought that it was good. good word use and rhyming. it was a very tender piece that painted a good picture of nature. i like nature pieces. i think that they have a peaceful quality about them. i liked it. keep it up.
I think that the 5th stanza had one too many sylables and makes it kind of hard to read but other than that it is a great piece. I really love how you describe everything, it could truly see the setting. Really good write.