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    dots Submission Name: nothing is foreverdots
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    Author: frank bazaya
    ASL Info:    24/m/uk
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 10/12/5
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 294
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1671



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       for all those who have read my previous stuff, well now you can see how it is always so easy for someone to make the wrong mistakes. i thought i loved someone, i thought i knew someone. i thought it forever to be, to the end she would ride with me...but its all lies, people!i hate it but the fact remains...NOTHING IS FOREVER


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    Why does it always have to be,
    The innocence of joy…snatched away from me.
    The same mistake, my hearts misplaced
    In-depth in shame…my souls disgraced.
    I saw a change, a glitter in the dark
    But far from truth, you just killed the spark.

    For days none came close
    For days my love I would propose,
    But no more…in a number of ways, I suppose.
    Together we traversed…
    But now alone I’ll ride that hearse.

    This is my hearts funeral procession
    Engulfed into so much of life’s depression.
    No inclinations…cut me off I’ve lost the sensation.
    Forget the tendencies…you really have lost a friend to thee.
    Betrayal to me…a shattered smile of glee.
    This thing called love cast it out into a fire lit sea.

    No second chance, my anger enhance…
    You play with my mind…I can’t deal with your kind.
    Now I’m far from blind, these actions I seek to find.
    Emotions I wish I could understand…
    Thoughts I wish I could comprehend…
    But maybe it’s for the best… I’m not your man

    My heart you took away…
    My love you lead astray…
    Now my joy you’ve put at bay.
    You made your choice, I’ve disclosed my voice.
    You’ve let me go…
    Now I’m on the road home,
    Condemned with no one to call my own.
    But rather that…than conflict with your heart of stone.

    Why does it always have to be…?
    The innocence of joy has been snatched away from me…
    NOTHING IS FOREVER!










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    ||| Comments |||
      love sucks, but you have to live and learn. you did a great job of "spilling" some emotions. i love this poem and i hope things get better. it's true things don't last as long as you want them to, but take from the time you did get the good things and use the bad towards making teh next one better.**
    | Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this, i liked the rhyme scheme...i am sorry that this person hurt you, and your right, nothing is forever.
    | Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by jessie thomas | [ Reply to This ]



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