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    dots Submission Name: My emo songdots
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    Author: emoisme
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 14/20/6
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       You fall for those boys who leave you with out saying goodbye


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    dotsMy emo songdots
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    I write this sad emo song
    Soft and sweet
    It explains everything
    Lonely days and even lonlier nights
    The thoughts of you never fade away
    Your bright blue eyes come to mind
    You didn't call when you said you would but I sat by the phone anyway
    Waiting
    I cried but not for you for me
    I hate how nieve I am
    I fell for you shaggy brown hair and quirky charm
    Your "I love you's" and "See you tomorrows"
    That black t-shirt that you love so much I still have it
    It smells like you
    Sweat and cologne
    Your guitar is still at my house
    You used to play for me
    Our song
    "She almost pretty, she beautiful to me"
    The song is over, my heart still broken and your guitar in pieces on my floor




    Submitted on 2004-11-26 18:11:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can identify! I love emo poetry, I have SOOOO much of it that I need to burn or something! Lol! Anyways, keep it up! i liked the rythmn of it.
    | Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by AmandaLyn | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, truely an emo song. I want to get to know you I love emo people are you one? Mind conversing with a gothic person haha... Nice and pretty glad I read it..
    (( also do you like bright eyes ))

    Cheers
    | Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm not a big fan of emo music much anymore but i used to love it, just about as much as i loved my emo boy. this just brings back all those great memories of him, in fact i'm wearing his old shirt right now, it's really kind of sad. but enough of my blabbering! great poem i liked it alot
    | Posted on 2004-11-26 00:00:00 | by kc | [ Reply to This ]



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