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    dots Submission Name: You don't do anything rightdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 754
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1079



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    dotsYou don't do anything rightdots
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    You don't do anything right
    what a sight of running of into the woods
    with the knife and the wife
    Afraid a hieghts
    so you don't take that flight
    school waste of time
    rather be commiting a crime
    It is time to tell the truth
    wait you can't
    "You don't do anything right"
    It's true
    father like son
    thats why you hate me
    why i'm your son?
    because you fuck trailer park hoe.
    Have to deal with a ton
    Concluding your son.
    "You don't do anything right"
    some things never makes since
    so step back watch me drop this
    if you want it come get
    you fed up with me
    Well I'm fed up with you
    This why i'm writing this tune
    To show you I don't need you
    "You don't do anything right"
    well people can change
    that why you can do something right
    just say that you be there for me
    I will listen to you




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      Just a guess but im guessing you dont like your dad. Yeah I dont like my dad at all either. Me moved to florida when I was about 7 and he calls me about once or twice a year and tries to be a part of my life. Well keep writing. Again try not to put stuff in here that has nothing to do with the song or rap. Keep writing though.
    | Posted on 2004-11-29 00:00:00 | by FeelingAlive | [ Reply to This ]
      Just a guess but im guessing you dont like your dad. Yeah I dont like my dad at all either. Me moved to florida when I was about 7 and he calls me about once or twice a year and tries to be a part of my life. Well keep writing. Again try not to put stuff in here that has nothing to do with the song or rap. Keep writing though.
    | Posted on 2004-11-29 00:00:00 | by FeelingAlive | [ Reply to This ]


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