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    Author: amlyn
    ASL Info:    23/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    4.42 - 48/37/9
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 219
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    His look, his touch, without warning.
    Its night, but bringing the heat of morning.

    His lips and mine, hot and searing.
    An interruption, the only to bring fearing.

    Two bodies, now one, emit heat of the sun.
    He is my bullet and I his gun.

    At last, we merge, passions higher and
    higher.
    Our heat as one an eternal fire.




    Submitted on 2004-11-27 15:28:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oooooh la la, steamy! :) I like it! I was trying to capture something similar in a poem I was writing, but I couldn't get it. I like the word pictures, and the ryhme is outstanding! makes me kinda wanna go grab my b/f! lol!
    ~Amanda
    | Posted on 2004-11-27 00:00:00 | by AmandaLyn | [ Reply to This ]



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