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    dots Submission Name: Snowy Love Balladdots
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    Author: eener
    ASL Info:    21/f/wi
    Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 351/370/53
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSnowy Love Balladdots
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    As the snow falls in sheets
    Far away from the home
    Of a heart that still beats
    Very close to my own,

    This white weather ignites
    Feelings blissful but blue.
    The beauty of such sights
    Surpasses all but you.

    Each snowflake lightly soft
    Drifts from clouds it fell through,
    Landing gently as oft
    As your kisses used to.

    Boughs dip heavy and low
    From slightly cold cascades.
    As I watch light winds blow,
    I miss our escapades.

    Together we shall be
    Another winter's day.
    I'd love for you to see
    What snowballs have to say.

    While the snows come and go
    You will always be mine.
    Although I miss you so,
    Our love won't cease to shine.




    Submitted on 2004-11-27 22:35:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was beautiful.. i can tell you spent a lot of time on this one.. the flow allowed me to just take in the whole of the scene.. it is interesting seeing something so seemingly flawless appear.. ha i was compelled to tell you that
    well all the best

    Adam
    | Posted on 2004-11-27 00:00:00 | by Pyrosis | [ Reply to This ]
      i like how you compared sno and love. Lots of good imagery..its a good write i liked it it was very peaceful and had a nice flow.
    | Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by FadedSilence | [ Reply to This ]
      this seems to be very good.
    seems to be complex also.
    here lately, my brain hasn't been up to par.

    I like this.
    I couldn't quite understand one part of it, but like I said, it's probably because I've been going through a brain decline.
    | Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by max | [ Reply to This ]


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