Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Fake Diamond Ringdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Leila
    ASL Info:    19/female/South Africa
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 98/85/18
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 465
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 616



    Description:
       This poem isn't written from personal experience, but domestic violence cna affect anyone, even if it's a neighbour or friend. Anyone, even women, who raise a hand to their partner, should rot in hell.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsFake Diamond Ringdots
    -------------------------------------------


    The ring hits the floor,
    then a slam of the door.

    Don't bother to look again.
    She's angry this time,
    she won't be back 'till ten.

    Probably in some fancy car,
    better hope he doesn't get far.

    Maybe she'll never come back.
    She was a feisty one,
    she was bound to crack.

    Shouldn't have called her a 2-buck whore,
    for nothing, then beat her to the floor.

    Hey, at least it made you feel great.
    Give this fake-diamond ring
    to some other girl you hate.




    Submitted on 2004-11-28 17:39:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Im stunned, u really hit the mark this time...any kind of violence is pointless, because you hurt more people than u heal...if only other people would see things the way u do...thanks for sharing...hope to read more from yah, ttyl
    Shane
    | Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by Drayke | [ Reply to This ]
      So many types of abuse, most of which we never hear about, and coming from both sides as you rather suggested. Not always beatings involved, but the beating ones are the ones that we do get to hear about, sometimes too late. There are abuses that leave only invisable scars, scars so deeply imbedded that they may never be seen, but they play some nasty games with the victims mind.
    | Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by arkay | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.