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Submission Name: Unchanged dots

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Author:	T.Redd
Elite Ratio:	4.01 - 58/70/42
Words:	32

Class/Type:	Poetry/Mirror or Mask
Total Views:	1154
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	260

Description:
The answer is always hideing . . . . . . . . . . .

Unchanged dots

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The pull
is mathamatical-
the arrangment
is unnatural,
It's always been-
Eracing it
does not end it.

Submitted on 2004-11-28 21:34:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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hey dude i dont know what is it with your typo's... but who cares... good job... but i wish you might find the answer... try solving it sometimes give good results... ehehehe
| Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by Mer_de_Noms | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.