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    Author: T.Redd
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 58/70/42
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
    Total Views: 1154
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 260



    Description:
       The answer is always hideing . . . . . . . . . . .


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsUnchangeddots
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    The pull
    is mathamatical-
    the arrangment
    is unnatural,
    It's always been-
    Eracing it
    does not end it.

















    Submitted on 2004-11-28 21:34:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey dude i dont know what is it with your typo's... but who cares... good job... but i wish you might find the answer... try solving it sometimes give good results... ehehehe
    | Posted on 2004-11-28 00:00:00 | by Mer_de_Noms | [ Reply to This ]


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