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    dots Submission Name: Unexpecteddots
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    Author: amlyn
    ASL Info:    23/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    4.42 - 48/37/9
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 233
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1051



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    Acceptance overpowered refusal, subconsciously.
    True desire, unquestioned, but unwanted briefly.
    You, persisted, me, not allowing the unthinkable.
    I wanted to not want it so bad, it possessed me.
    I saw it with my eyes closed, blocking it out.
    It had me when I wanted to not feel it.
    It was unexpected.
    Unhappiness, negativity, all disappeared.
    Happiness, the future, flows all through me.
    What I had fought against now fulfills me.
    A change, in me and in life, surrounds me.
    My heart, once lost, you found and hold now.
    I give in, at last, my heart now free and living.
    It was unexpected.
    Love, without warning, completes me.
    You, completing me, me allowing you to.
    I now embrace it, allowing it to surround me.
    I see it with eyes wide open now, and I rejoice.
    I surrender; you have me, never ceasing to end.
    You are a part of me; I am a part of you.
    Unexpected, at first, now forever cherished.





    Submitted on 2004-11-29 19:30:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i liked it too. i like the way you found love without even looking for it. aha the old cliché of life. heh. i'm happy for ya.
    | Posted on 2004-11-29 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats really good. I wish that this girl would write something like that about me... The whole begining part is where she is, and I almost got her but a large time apart set me back. But your poem has inspired me to keep with it. Thanks.
    | Posted on 2004-11-29 00:00:00 | by Cassius | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the hope in this piece. So, many poems I read on this site (AND I KNOW MY OWN ARE PRETTY DEPRESSING!) are sad. And, it's good every now and then to read a poem full of hope, and love found, but not lost. Good write. Keep it up please!
    ~BCute
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]



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