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    dots Submission Name: my sexualitydots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       ok so this is all i have to say, but please don't think of me much differently by this. i mean, i'll get over it, right? anyways sorry if theres any confusion. uh, bi-. i mean, bye.


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    dotsmy sexualitydots
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    here i am. i am me.
    do you know my sexuality?
    well, i'm not straight.
    and that is pure reality.
    but i'm not gay,
    just bi- lets say.
    she says i masterbate,
    so i might be a little "A"
    i'm a bi- and,
    a-sexual @sshole,
    who knows what she's doing,
    when she dances with a pole.
    i killed the muffin man,
    and brought him back up to life.
    i caught lil' gingy,
    and cut him up with a knife.
    "Can't catch me,
    "I'm the gingerbread man."
    oh yea, wanna bet?
    i'll bet a million i can.
    but as much as i love girls,
    i still love d!ck more.
    but still take a guess,
    that i don't care anymore.




    Submitted on 2004-11-30 18:02:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is some gay sh.it I think that this does in fact make you gay, not bi. A comment is a comment. So I just commented on this piece of massive shi.t so that I could get my levels up.
    I love you.
    Mary
    | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by BloodyMary87 | [ Reply to This ]
      question how do you grow out of being bi? idk *sigh* people these days..guess what i'm bi too lol. Anyways this was funny in one of those funny ways. that's all i can seriously say and i like dick more too.

    ~~Danni~~
    | Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      As much as I would incourage people being them selves in their writings, but this one just seems a little childish to me. I mean I dont care that your bi or what not cause thats not what bothers me, or that you can say it with out even flintching, but most of the time when some one as younge as us is screaming something about themselve, most of the time its just stuff we are confused about.
    Ya know what I mean? not that your sexually confused or anything, I just think that It really looks odd that you'd submit this in front of people that dont talk to you everyday.
    not to sound mean or anything. your a good writer just try and focus on other things.
    Kacey
    | Posted on 2004-11-30 00:00:00 | by Lachesis | [ Reply to This ]
      aighty hunny. A EFFING PLUS FOR THIS ONE! and a favs add for sure. i love every last word. not a damn thing to change about it. if there is an ounce of truth in it...HELL YEAH! if there isnt. damn good piece of work. well. its damn good either way. this is great tina. i love it. i keep sayin that..oh well. it is. way to put it out there love. talk to you laters. ^5! woo hoo! KT
    | Posted on 2004-11-30 00:00:00 | by Printer Shock | [ Reply to This ]
      I get why this is comedy, so why can't other people? "Are you really bi?" Come on man! If Tina was, then the poem would not be under 'comedy' would it? And Life Resistance, get a life!

    Anyway, I could never bring myself to write something like this so I'll give you that, but I agree that it does seem a little childish, with it's content saying to me: "hehe, i know something you don't." Okay, I'm wierd but for me, this creates the wrong atmosphere, you said you would be honest, but reading this has me a little worried.
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this poem. Of course anything about sexuality gets my attention. I like how you start right out with saying what you are. You have a great way with words and it was hilarious. Keep up the great writing. *blows you a kiss* And by the way, the comments that were negative, those people can just go eat [censored] adn die.:)
    ~Jane
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by Jane Lost | [ Reply to This ]
      yea i get why this is under comedy. um... how are you gonna tell somebody to grow out of their sex life hyper... anyway... i love the ending, i think the last line is what killed me the most:
    but as much as i love girls,
    i still love d!ck more.
    by the way i just found out,
    that my mama's a whore.

    hehe, i dunno if i'm the only that thinks that's hilarious, but if i am, oh well.
    | Posted on 2004-12-06 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]


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