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    Author: OrenroccA
    ASL Info:    17/M/Virgina
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 29/38/18
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 220
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 760



    Description:
       Hey I need a title...........any sugestions?


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    You are what makes the stars shine
    You are so amazing
    You are what fills my heart with love
    You are so wonderful

    And I'll never let you go
    I'll hold you forever
    Until the day we day we die
    You'll be in my arms

    You are what calms the angry
    You are so amazing
    You are what fills my soul with joy
    You are so beautiful

    I've been looking, searching for someone like you
    And I am so blessed to have you
    And now that I do my days are better

    And I'll never let you go
    I'll hold you forever
    Until the day we day we die
    You'll be in my arms





    Submitted on 2004-11-30 18:03:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem seems like... i dunno its kinda scattered i don't know if that makes a lot of sense but it just seems all scattered around...its probably just me tho! lol but anyways its a good poem keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by grinninggashes | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh ya i think a great title for this poem would be like I'll Never Let Go just pull a sent out of ur poem and use it.. something kind of catchy.
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by grinninggashes | [ Reply to This ]



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