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    dots Submission Name: Virus Resistant Papayasdots
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    Author: ax2x3m
    ASL Info:    21/m/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    2.53 - 24/24/14
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 340
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1130



    Description:
       my take on genetic engineering and on how people play as god using science... please tell me what you think :D


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    dotsVirus Resistant Papayasdots
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    make me to something to match you eyes
    for i am clay in the hands of science
    dreams of virus resistant papayas are here
    so what are you waiting for?

    lets us destroy so we could rebuild
    for i am a slave in the hands of science
    you will never know unless you do
    but failure would never be an option

    go forth and write your plea of insanity
    but if you fail face the wrath of humanity

    like a house of cards your hands controlling
    playing god with science as tools
    in your mind we will be extolling
    in reality your already lost

    make me to something that matches your mind
    for i am ignorant in the hands of science
    what is only dreampt before is now available
    so what are you waiting for

    lets us destroy so we could rebuild
    for i am a slave in the hands of science
    you will never know unless you do
    but failure would never be an option

    go forth and write your plea of insanity
    but if you fail face the wrath of humanity




    Submitted on 2004-12-01 07:10:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really liked this, the second line really hit home. The only thing I thibnk detracted from it was the repetition of the second and third stanzas, I felt that the use of a 'chorus' wasnt wholy necessary. On the whole though I thought this was a fantastic write and I will add it to my favourites.
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Smee | [ Reply to This ]
      OMG! i forgot to mention that virus resistant papayas is something we learned in biology class... modified papayas that kills insects, that thing kinda stuck to my head :P
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by ax2x3m | [ Reply to This ]



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