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    dots Submission Name: Eternally Infinitedots
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    Author: SmokinMad420
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 2/6/7
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEternally Infinitedots
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    I am a soft caress
    of sound engulfing visions
    Wonderfully promising
    desire or serenity
    Slowly metamorphosing
    I tremble….

    For I am a misty creature
    of the moon
    A hypnotic sphere
    of reflection
    Echoing breathlessly……..

    I am thought




    Submitted on 2004-12-01 22:01:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is odd because I was just commenting on defending rhyming, and I rarely enjoy poems that dont. But your words are beautiful and I love the way you end the whole thing with telling what it is. All the lines before 'I am thought' are complex and deep...yet those three words pull it all together so wonderfully. Keep up the great writting :)
    | Posted on 2004-12-01 00:00:00 | by Jane Lost | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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